Tutorial feedback

Fri 2nd Dec

Tutorial with David

Feedback:

  • consistency
  • body copy – 8.5
  • titles/quotation – do you need “-“
  • scale of images
  • take out hypenations
  • get rid of EK, MM,…
  • detailing: orphans & widows
  • new system for titles only? (the diagonals)
  • previous system looks a lot better – 2 columns
  • space after each Q&A
  • pace
    • consider more light and shade
    • try reverse elements

TO DO:

  • Work back into the older design (draft 1)
  • try black background/white text
  • take out hyphens
  • create separate paragraphs for each Q&A for the designers
  • keep 2 columns
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Author: ellenreiddesign

First year Graphic Communication student at Cardiff Metropolitan University.

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